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Springtide Serenade

For three cold months
The earth has been sleeping.
For ninety dark days,
My heart has been weeping.

But winter’s dream
Is coming to an end.
A broken heart
The spring shall mend.

A warmth is in the air,
The days again grow bright.
The world at last is waking
From its neverending night.

The ice of winter melts,
A warm wind welcomes spring.
And somewhere, by the sea,
The bells of destiny ring.

They sing a song of hope
That echoes through the air.
They fill my soul with light
And drive away despair.

So far, far away,
The bells ring by the sea.
Their call resurrects
A fading memory.

As dark as I have grown
Beneath the winter’s frost,
The springtide calls me home.
My soul is never lost.

I am summoned to the light.
The distant spring winds bring
A dawn of ever-rising hope,
A new awakening.

The grass is evergreen,
The sun shines in my eyes,
Though darkness used to reign,
The light shall always rise.
©2007-2009 ~flamekeeper27
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Author's Comments

For anyone wondering, no, I did not mean springTIME. The tide refers to a sweeping pattern of events, like "the turn of the tide" or something like that. In this case, it means the arrival of spring.

So, it's a little premature, but I'm just getting tired of winter, and can't wait for spring. My favorite time of year is probably when the first signs of spring appear. (Baseball fans: pitchers and catchers report to spring training this week! :) so maybe it's not TOO premature) But baseball aside, I do love when I smell that first warm breeze that reminds me of a year earlier, and I know spring is on its way.

But about the beginning of the poem, it's partially a reference to SAD (Seasonal Affective Disorder) where the decrease in light during the winter can lead to depression. So the sooner winter is over, the better. Until then, I can at least write and look forward to it. :)

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:iconlostnsilence:
hey that's good! i like it.

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"He would create proudly out of the freedom and power of his soul, as the great artificer whose name he bore, a living thing, new and soaring and beautiful, impalpable, imperishable."
:iconflamekeeper27:
:)

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There is no greater misery than to remember, with bitter regret, a day when you were happy.
:iconbluflamedragon18:
oh man..i feel the same way. winter can be cheery, but also..dark and ugh. i have bad relationship luck in winter. spring is nice though. spring's the time of "twitterpated" people. (i hate Bambi. that movie is waay too sad).

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The Truth is Out There
:iconjulesthenorweegie:
Awesome :)
You`re a great writer, very talented :)

Keep it up, I`m looking forward to read more of your poems :)

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This was not my idea
:iconnani-midori:
I don't know why, but this line just fills me with nostalgia

"And somewhere, by the sea,
The bells of destiny ring."

I love the poem. It made me think of the smell of springtime. And it reminded me of a song.
:iconflamekeeper27:
I'm glad you thought of the smell of spring, that's just what I was going for with this poem.

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There is no greater misery than to remember, with bitter regret, a day when you were happy.
:iconnani-midori:
You succeeded. I like how you do your ballads. Ballads are fun.
:iconflamekeeper27:
Ah, yes they are.

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There is no greater misery than to remember, with bitter regret, a day when you were happy.
:iconnani-midori:
Have you read Shakespeares Sonnets? Good stuff.

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